A Portrait of Robert Burns Robert Burns

Letter № 240 · CCXL

To Mr. Thomson


Dumfries · 1 December 1792

Your alterations of my "Nannie, O!" are perfectly right. So are those of "My wife's a winsome wee thing." Your alteration of the second stanza is a positive improvement. Now, my dear Sir, with the freedom which characterizes our correspondence, I must not, cannot alter "Bonnie Lesley." You are right; the word "Alexander" makes the line a little uncouth, but I think the thought is pretty. Of Alexander, beyond all other heroes, it may be said, in the sublime language of Scripture, that "he went forth conquering and to conquer." For nature made her what she is, And never made anither. (Such a person as she is.) This is, in my opinion, more poetical than "Ne'er made sic anither." However, it is immaterial: make it either way. "Caledonie," I agree with you, is not so good a word as could be wished, though it is sanctioned in three or four instances by Allan Ramsay; but I cannot help it. In short, that species of stanza is the most difficult that I have ever tried. R. B.

Recipient
Mr. Thomson
Place
Dumfries
Dated
1 December 1792
Source note
Dumfries, 1st December, 1792
Source
Project Gutenberg #18500 — The Complete Works of Robert Burns (ed. Allan Cunningham)