Your alterations of my "Nannie, O!" are perfectly right. So are those of "My wife's a winsome wee thing." Your alteration of the second stanza is a positive improvement. Now, my dear Sir, with the freedom which characterizes our correspondence, I must not, cannot alter "Bonnie Lesley." You are right; the word "Alexander" makes the line a little uncouth, but I think the thought is pretty. Of Alexander, beyond all other heroes, it may be said, in the sublime language of Scripture, that "he went forth conquering and to conquer." For nature made her what she is, And never made anither. (Such a person as she is.) This is, in my opinion, more poetical than "Ne'er made sic anither." However, it is immaterial: make it either way. "Caledonie," I agree with you, is not so good a word as could be wished, though it is sanctioned in three or four instances by Allan Ramsay; but I cannot help it. In short, that species of stanza is the most difficult that I have ever tried. R. B.
Letter № 240 · CCXL
To Mr. Thomson
Dumfries · 1 December 1792
- Recipient
- Mr. Thomson
- Place
- Dumfries
- Dated
- 1 December 1792
- Source note
- Dumfries, 1st December, 1792
- Source
- Project Gutenberg #18500 — The Complete Works of Robert Burns (ed. Allan Cunningham)