MY DEAR SIR, I agree with you that the song, "Katherine Ogie," is very poor stuff, and unworthy, altogether unworthy of so beautiful an air. I tried to mend it; but the awkward sound, Ogie, recurring so often in the rhyme, spoils every attempt at introducing sentiment into the piece. The foregoing song[205] pleases myself; I think it as in my happiest manner: you will see at first glance that it suits the air. The subject of the song is one of the most interesting passages of my youthful days, and I own that I should be much flattered to see the verses set to an air which would ensure celebrity. Perhaps, after all, 'tis the still glowing prejudice of my heart that throws a borrowed lustre over the merits of the composition. I have partly taken your idea of "Auld Rob Morris." I have adopted the two first verses, and am going on with the song on a new plan, which promises pretty well. I take up one or another, just as the bee of the moment buzzes in my bonnet-lug; and do you, sans ceremonie, make what use you choose of the productions. Adieu, &c. R. B.
Letter № 239 · CCXXXIX
To Mr. Thomson
14 November 1792
Footnotes
- 205. Ye banks and braes and streams around The castle o' Montgomery. Song CLXXXII
- Recipient
- Mr. Thomson
- Dated
- 14 November 1792
- Source note
- 14th November, 1792
- Source
- Project Gutenberg #18500 — The Complete Works of Robert Burns (ed. Allan Cunningham)